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Beautiful Creatures with Wings

Journal Entry: Sun Mar 1, 2015, 6:16 AM
Welcome to another edition of my Beautiful Creatures series. 

Today I am celebrating animals that can fly.

Please enjoy and show these fantastic artists some LOVE!

(captive) His majesty by phalalcrocorax

.:Snowy Egret:. by RHChengRuby by the Window by MichelLalonde

Kingfisher by RichardConstantinoffMessy eater by kayaksailor

.:Ruffle:. by Kay-Noire

European Starlings. by Sparkle-PhotographyMORE MORE MORE by KeswickPinhead


Facing the sunset by BogdanBoevA Meeting of Minds by TerribleTer



Seagull Party by jaydoncabe

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Hey there, Prettyflour here on behalf of :iconpoeticalcondition: with the critique you requested. Wow… what a stellar poem! I think it represents Aspergers well- there is a sense of independence and hope behind an otherwise bitter feel to the poem- a cool juxtaposition. Normally I am not a huge fan of rhyming poetry but ...


I'll start by answering your questions. Is the layout okay? Do the paragraph breaks or format need changing? I think the layout works- the breaks are right where they should be and they provide a good flow. Does the theme come through well enough? I think so. The questions posed are thought provokin...

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moonkata84 Featured By Owner 18 hours ago  New member Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the fave!
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lauriegirl48 Featured By Owner 1 day ago
Thanks for the fave! :)
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doveangel8 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks for the llama
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All-My-Darkness Featured By Owner 3 days ago
Thank you for reading.
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PacoFreeman Featured By Owner 4 days ago
Thanks for the fav, I appreciate it.
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MeMyselfAndMaddy Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much! :wave:
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LainaBear Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the :+fav:!!! :meow:
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greendaybunnyrox Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Student
Are you a banana?
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prettyflour Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
No but I like to EAT bananas.  :)
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greendaybunnyrox Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Student
oh
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