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Journal Entry: Mon May 25, 2015, 9:10 AM
A trip through my FAVS.


The Daily Magnet #59 by FridgePoetProject


Mylea-Autumn by pin100

The Sorrow of the LeavesThe light, decanted by the leaves - 'tis diffused,
A scattering barely seen from the ground;
Perhaps the greed of a few, who were crowned
By the light are blessed; the rest refused
This need... Could be a thought - or a ruse:
The leaves that are in the shadows still live;
They manage themselves, the Sun need not give
Any importance for their needs: disuse
Has made them adapt to their surroundings.
Just as a child who accepts the darkness,
The leaves survive.  And for this, adapting
To what we think as Fate wrought in sadness,
They are like their roof above: their callings
Understood; more than us, who see far less.
Rain Soothes the Distraught SoulMy mind disengages from the machine
and unravels like a gossamer blanket.
I lie on my bed as if tranquilized while I inhale the petrichor
Listening to the rain create ripples in the river
I am put in an instant bliss
the scent of the evergreen bushes soothes my distraught soul
and my mind is put to ease.


Under the Santa Monica Pier by DmitryKyznetsov

Revolution by CristianoTeofili

Abstract Voyage by DraGoonMS

DogstarI’m not one for writing hate-mail,
But I’m going to go postal
If one more person asks me
What I’m doing with my life.
I have aces and eights emblazed on my chest.
I have never worn a vest,
But if I did,
That’s where I would keep my cards.
Go ahead and tell me again
How smart I am,
How I can do anything.
I know.
That’s precisely the problem.
The reason I’ve spent two semesters at community college,
And changed my major four fucking times.
Ask me again,
Don’t you like math?
I’ll tell you again,
Yeah, I do, sometimes.
Know what else I like sometimes?
English, science, art, music, silence, business, pleasure, pain, the rain, the sun, the moon, the earth, helping people, hurting people, Buddhism, BDSM, feminism, comic books, poetry, punk rock, rock climbing, roller coasters, rocket science, astronomy, amateur phlebotomy, philosophy, psychology, psychopathy, serenity, cigarettes, chaos theory, coffee, canis vulpis, and carnivorous plants.
I am
My Reality, My FantasyI like my fantasy world, thanks.

Bauble Droplet... Merry Christmas by needcaffineParanoid Android by Martidy

Yoda by christopherburdett

Bitlets 219You can't build a bird, but you can craft a wing. to be heard (speak)i would write you
into sentience
if these sentences
weren't so wasteful.
       words, dismantle
       worry, overwhelm
call it a stanza
but this is a
b-b-b-breakdown;
deterioration rioting
wild and tearing
at my language.
       stomach, curdle
       scribe, pause
i would hold you
if only i could
stop these hands
from scribbling.
i would open myself
lay bare rampant wishful thinking,
scrawl suns and stars that do nothing
except shine bright and useless
screaming your name
in technicolour until maybe
just maybe
i caught your attention;
i would open myself
if only i weren't
so deathly afraid.
       mind, climb
       limbs, follow
heart, steady your beating;
handle adjective gently,
for some things are not
made for embellishment.
bravery is a promise
and i,
the anathema
of fidelity.
you soar, you swim,
you shine;
and i tire of assembling
wings that break and
ships t


Expecto Patronum by Nukasclaw


The Hapiness Of Spring by Lolita-Artz

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Cindi Ammeen
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Hey there, Prettyflour here on behalf of :iconpoeticalcondition: with the critique you requested. I’ll start by answering your questions. 1- I like the brevity. I am a fan of shorter works of poetry, and I just love it when someone can say a real lot with just a few words. Having said that, I think you made the right cho...


Hey there, Prettyflour here on behalf of :iconpoeticalcondition: with the critique you requested. I think this is a lovely take on Disney’s Frozen- you really captured the story well. It was very cool to take a movie I like turned into poetry. :) I like your use of punctuation in this- good choices there. As far as constr...

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Chanteur-de-Vent Featured By Owner 2 days ago
Thank you for the fave.
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jomog369 Featured By Owner 2 days ago
Thanks for the llama, so here's one in return!
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brassteeth Featured By Owner 3 days ago
Thanks.
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DiceCube5 Featured By Owner 3 days ago  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
Thx for Llama!
Thanks For The Llama Emote  Catch! Hooray Llama Badges 
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marshallee1fangirl Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the lama
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tawunap159 Featured By Owner 5 days ago
Thank you so much for the +fav 
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awjay Featured By Owner 6 days ago
many thanks for your faving,,,,,Pulsating Tiboleka Avatar (commission) 
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BloodshotInk Featured By Owner May 21, 2015
Red Rose in teardrop crystal vase dewless 
Thanks for the fave <3
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sum1me Featured By Owner Edited May 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks a ton for the fave!Cheerleader Caramel dansen emote 
thanks for the watch!Five Nights at Freddy's 2 - Marionette - Icon GIF  
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kayandjay100 Featured By Owner May 19, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Many thanks Cindi for the Llama Badge! :tighthug: Cheers, Coco
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