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Duck and Cover- a short series of love notes

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-Duck!    

                                                               -The animal?

-Duck!

                                                                -and cover?

-Goose.

                                                                -You are such a brat!

-I miss you.

                                                                -I wish you hadn't said that.

-You wish upon every star that crosses your path. 

                                                                -You're not a star. You're a supernova.

-Ha! I'm a speck of dust. One swept beneath your rug.

                                                                -I don't have any rugs. I'm all about hard wood floors.

-I know and despite that I still love you. 
I wrote this for :iconezradeacon:'s Love Letters Contest but…it's word count is only 85 and the contest has a minimum of 500 for prose, so I can't enter it but wanted to post it anyway.  I went with a series of brief letters between two people.  

I hope you like it.  Feedback is always welcome.  :)
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Redsterfish's avatar
Romantically abstract sure.
Take my advice: get rid of that love thang, to have a life ;)