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I was watching New Moon... The Vote scene... When Edward said, “Why are you doing this to me?” It struck a nerve and gave me an idea of a different turn of events. What if Bella got pissed at this question, real pissed? Here is my answer.

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"You are not sorry. You are getting what you want. I will stay human, frail and mortal so that you can torture yourself with my scent and carry out your plot to hide me from the Volturri. Go ahead, make yourself sick with worry until I die someday and I'm sure that you will wallow in misery over how you couldn't protect me from death you fucking hypocrite."

Is my favorite quote from your story. =)

Wow,I scrolled down and said to myself "I'm not going to read all ofthis. But I'm glad I did It was quite enjoyable you had me reading word after word.If your writing a second part "Fill me in."

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I want to mirror your image to its fullest perfection,
never be blind or too old
to uphold your weighty wavering reflection.
I want to unfold. -Rainer Maria Rilke