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Parched, starving

for profound waters.

In the early morning

you touch my scars,

you rise above time,

you don't unplug me,

YOU are my sweetest downfall.

My first try at a title poem.  Definitely something I'd like to try again.  Have you ever written one?

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LXXV Random ::FEATUREZ:: -- A RetrospectiveWell, there have officially been 75 "Random ::FEATUREZ::" on this page, dating back to 2011. I hope to do 75 more, at least. But, before then, I thought I would go through them all and grab a piece from each one to share in this retrospective feature. These are all amazing artists, so please show them your love. :)
    
    
I am sorry by noxyzz relapse. by disproportionalX Time stands still... by Mynyny Deer Diary by Daniel-Fontanini Blind Faith by AronBack Perseverance by XxAprilxApathyxX 1. Ruslan and Rimma by birdofdecadence broken by Nyctalus Take My Breath Away by Re3oid midnight by realARTIZT
Falling sunshine by ByancaH A humble heart by lnp 

Faves-Of-The-Week!!I'm sorry I'm so late with this; my day was a tad shaky. This week has been full of some of the most awesome submissions I have seen yet. Take the time to soak in every single one of these pieces! 

Subtlety can be both powerful and weak. This poem has managed to capture the 'dagger' in symbolism and euphemism; coming strong with an emphasis on the might of spoken word. The lines aren't identically synonymous, but that only brings out the beauty in this piece. There's a lot of hidden emotion roiling to the surface as the author describes an almost pristine mental landscape; with her words painting pictures that fade and emerge with each stanza. 

Oh my God. This poem is awesome. There's a lingering tantric motion in the boundlessness of mental state; teetering on the edge of awareness and fantasy. I love how this poem brings out the instinctual human desire for more when there oftentimes isn't. There's a sea

Random ::FEATUREZ:: XXXVII    
   
  Pyro. by Ophelia-in-reverse Kawcza by e-M-D-e * by luxuss
black balloon by suchykaszel  2 x 2. The Border by aloner777 Blitz by alisinwonder
Contact by mldzz Ukraine244 by WornPixel Family Portrait by hsybbed Sir Clapton by Lirstencils wasp by aD-chol
 Auschwitz Rails by xxxNicolettexxx Classic Prague by stasb Moorgaenger by Cryel
Great Barrier Island, at sunset by Lenahiia The silent sunset by LinsenSchuss Koh Phayam Sunset by comsic Abandoned House by kosmipt W A N N A B E . A P R I C O T by Krissey
Far Away In My Dreamland by AlexandruCrisan 

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