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Beneath the shimmering surface
a thousand pieces
all in white
are the angels who can't fly.

Peeling away
the moon's scars,
the fallen angels
are stitching seems-
little hopes in the stormy sea.

A wicked wind blows
immortal embers
into a new dawn
where we can walk together
in the last shafts of sunlight. 
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:) This is actually a really good title poem in my honest opinion. I could've almost sworn that I was reading your own work here :happybounce:

Well done :) I have nothing else to say to be honest :shrug:
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prettyflour Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.  Writing a title poem turned out to be a lot more challenging than I anticipated but I was happy with the end result.  :)
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shehrozeameen Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:) And it shows. Its well done honestly :hug:
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hypermagical Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014
Thank you so much for including my poem title. :) 
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Gabriel513 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like the concept here, I write a lot of angels, but never the ones b'neath the waves.  Good work, one of which I am proud to add as a first in the literary faves:happybounce: 
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prettyflour Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!  Glad you liked it.  :)
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Hades-Flower Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014
Thanks for including my poem title! Another great title poem. You're on a roll. Clap 
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prettyflour Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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Secke Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Student General Artist
Thanks for including my poem's title :)
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prettyflour Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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Margethe94 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014
This is amazing, thanks for including my work! :)
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prettyflour Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Heart Heart Heart 
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betwixtthepages Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for including one of my titles--I'm honored! :heart:
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prettyflour Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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Anninhaxox Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
You did an amazing job with this. Love it! :) 
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prettyflour Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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Anninhaxox Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014
You're welcome :) 
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