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June 22, 2017
garden by prettyflour
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Literature Text

the morning light slants
all golden and violet,
color radiates
all through my geraniums,
never to be picked,
only to be admired,
while we walk through the garden
Written for Jubilant Japanese June over at :iconprojectdfc:

The form:

A choka literally means ‘long poem’ and features alternating syllabic lines of 5 and 7, where the last two lines are both 7. The minimum amount of lines is seven and this form allows for infinite amounts of lines. The minimum (7 lines) sequence is: 5 - 7 - 5 - 7 - 5 - 7 - 7

This piece was inspired by a wonderful photo by :iconiriscup:   iriscup

Geranium by iriscup
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