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a trail of tattoos
erupt from my fingertips
and wrap themselves around you
I want to paint you
with colors I created
and stain your skin with my lips
Day three of HaikuWriMo

Format: Choka

Got any tattoos?
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Anninhaxox Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
Truly amazing. I really like this. :) 
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prettyflour Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!
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Anninhaxox Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
You're welcome. 
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chryssalis Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
:clap::clap:
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prettyflour Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hug 
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andrewpom Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Student Writer
cool imagery and very sensual too. the 5/7/7 structure works well; i've never written a choka, but i might try one now.

oh and nah, i don't have any tats as of yet, though i will sometime in the future. probably in the tribal style though not sure exactly what it'll be - i haven't designed it yet skull emoticons wink 
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prettyflour Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much for the comment.  I was definitely going for something on the sensual side.

I hope you try and take on choke- it's a style that I think flows really nicely.

No tattoos? There is always time for that sort of thing in the future. Design something cool- take you time and make it stellar!
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't have any tattoos myself but I don't mind them on others :]
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LadyBrookeCelebwen Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like this! The last line especially is nice. :D
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prettyflour Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much for commenting!
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